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Generally,we prefer to do things the way we considered（consider） to be the best．However,it is
important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an（去掉an 补充：一条建议a piece of advice） advice when we have serious
problems in our lives．Parents have gained some life experiences（experience 补充：该词做”经验“时,不可数） and they know what（how） to
act in different situations．That's why we should ask them for help first when they have
problems．Therefore（however）,there are moments when we avoid them and don't want to follow
them．With time passed（passing ）,my brother as well as I have（as） realized that our parents are right．
Please turn for（to） your parents when in trouble,for they (添加 are)worth trusting and ready to offer
help all the time．