修改英语日记.
Mar.2nd.
The weather became warmer.
I betrayed my feelings too easily.I was depressed since I failed the English test.No matter what endeavor I made ,a little progress was made .For the sake of raising my grade ,drawing up a plan related to English learning ,I made every effort to keep my plan.Nevertheless ,the result did not satisfy me but make me disappointed.
Suddenly,an idea is striking me!By the beginning of this term ,I had told myself seriously that,all my struggle to achieve my goal was not to be compared with others.But just with whom I used to be.The vital importance was to witness the faint progress I make everyday.
Fortunately,I was capable of realizing the true meaning of struggle.Just for yourself Just for your dream!
麻烦看看有没有语法错误.能不能有点高级句型润色一下.嗯THX.
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解答
I betrayed my feelings too easily.这是中式英语啊I am often not myself.
I was depressed since I failed the English test 改为had been depressed
By the beginning of this term ,I had told myself seriously that have told
整体还是不错的,小的语法错误其实你说的要改的那两句我是从英语日记书是摘选的无改动。但我其实也觉得不妥。since作时间状语是主句可以有完成时也可以用过去式,但我要表达式要更强调先后强调因果。BY+过去时间,其后面应该有过去完成时的。
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