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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor.
Making friends are indispensable in everyone's life.There is no denying the fact that intelligent and humor are two vital characters of a good friend.Some people,however,may claim that it is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor.As for me ,I'm quite agree with it
To begin with,intelligent friends often enlighten us and teach us something useful which is benefit for our life and career.It means that we will be inflenced by intelligent people and inclined to gain some characters from them.Most importantly,intelligent friends also have a proper goal.They manage their time for their goal,implementing it and complementing themselves,so they have a relatively high probability to success in their life.Staying long with a friend who is intelligent like this,we will be intelligent gruadually too.We can learn a lot of wholesome things from them,but a friend who have a good sense of humor just can brings us jokes.In our daily life,I thought intelligence is user than jokes.
Furthermore,an intelligent friend helps us more when we are in trouble.Compared with the humorous friends,an intelligent peole think more about the problem in a rational way.Useful suggestions and help from them will of much more importance to resolve the trouble we meet.For instance,if I was in trouble,those friends who are intelligent are more likely to put forth some constructive suggestions for me,while humorous friends may make a joke on me in a improper time.Although their jokes will relax me temporary,but in fact it is suggestion that resovle the problem at this moment and jokes do nothing.
Nevertheless,a humorous friend is also benefical to us.We will have fun and happiness when we stay with them,which probable leads a high efficiency in our work and studying.To sum up,it will be a pleasure to make friends both with intelligent people and humorous people.If I have to choose,however,I prefer to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor for the reason above
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语法问题还真不少,单复数,语态时态等.改了很多.句意和基本语序就不改了.自己再check下吧.Do you agree with the saying that it's better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a goo...
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