请问这句话有语法问题吗?
The main purpose of the painter can be interpreted in terms of a problem in the present education of our children.
还是应该这样：
The main purpose of the painter can be interpreted in terms of education Problems of our children at present.
我想表达的意思是：这幅画作者的目的是想说明当前孩子的教育问题.