这个英语句子有问题吗?Some flowers come to the world,the bees and the birds _英语解答

这个英语句子有问题吗?
Some flowers come to the world,the bees and the birds become happy,they sing and dance in the flowers.

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解答

Some flowers come into the world and the bees and birds become happy. They sing and dance on the flowers.
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