我这篇作文能得多少分?满分15
Warm-hearted and helpful person
My friend Tina is a Warm-hearted and helpful girl,who saved a boy from freeze river with her dog.
Not long ago,Tina was taking her dog for a walk near a river,while she was walking,she saw a boy playing on the bridge.“How dangerous hen boy was!”Tina thought,meanwhile,the boy fell into the river,and without more thought,Tina jumped into the river to help the boy left dangerous away.Unfortunately,in that the cold water,Tina was seized of panic anymore,“Oh!god,save us!”Tina prayed,and then,the legend really happened!Her dog,all of a sudden,jumped into the river and touch them out!
At last,Tina and that boy both were safty.We can learn from Tina with her bravery,her helpful,and her warm-hearted,and Tina said in the end:“Helping people is responsible of us!For all I don't have any repay,it makes me feel so satisfied!”
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解答
还可以,给13吧!
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