monkey is cute in the zoo
let me have a look at your new pet
today is Sunday,weather is quite fine,Lily and her family is going to zoo.they don't have a car,so they can only go there by bus.Lily likes dolphin,because it is very cute so she decides to see dolphin as soon as they arrive there.however,her younger cousin wants to see elephant and tiger first,so they discuss about it and then decide to see elephant and tiger first.Her younger cousin say "it is very kind of you,thank you for letting me see tiger first!" they have a very good day
改过了,绝对小学水平~老师应该不会疑心~