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I'd like to introduce my friends Li Leito you.He'sgoing to apply for a position your company. Hewas graduated from Shanghai University three years ago and since then she has worked as a salesman.Hespeaks English fluent and knows some Japanese and German.Heworks very hard and always try his bestto do everything than he does. He is honest,kind but easy to get along.Hewas born on August 21st,1984in Shandong Province.If he was accepted, I' m sure he will be fit for a position. Look forward to your early reply.
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a position (at) your company.
was graduated 删去was
she has worked as she改为he
fluent -> fluently
always try -> tries
删去than he does
but -> and
删去Province
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a -> the
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