谁来帮我改一下英语作文
Yesterday was Children's Day.I went on a school trip.We visited the museum of history.It was interesting.We went there by bus.On the bus,I talked with my classmate.Time goes quickly.I got to the museum.At the museum of history,I saw a lot about history and the guide tell us about history'stories.I learn a lot.I took a lot of great photos.It was time to go.I bought some lovely gifts for my parent.The gifts are cheap.All in all,it was an exciting Children's Day.
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解答
classmate 改为 classmates or a classmate.
tell 改成told
Learn 改成learned
parent 改成parentsIt was time to go 这句不用改吗 我想表达的是该走了不用改,因为是过去式,时态是对的,表达也是对的。
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