改写这个句子 I told you he would receive the parcel in time.用the parcel作主语
这是我改写的：I told you that the parcel would be received in time by him.或 The parcel would be received in time by him as i told you.
我看网上有另一种改写方式,You were told that the parcel would be received in time by him.
请问我自己改写的对吗?要是不对请指正,