I'd like to introduce you 3 famous sayings about marriage.The first one,"Love is an ideal thing; marriage is a real thing" was said by reputable poet Goethe.I think he was correct because people in love tend to selectively ignore invisible barriers.After they get married,however,problems such as finance,baby-sitting,and family supporting may occur.Therefore,before getting married,people should be well prepared to face the unknown future with his/her spouse.A famous basketball player,Shaquille O'neal said my second quote,thinking that "Two secrets to keep your marriage brimming:1.Whenever you're wrong,admit it; 2.Whenever you're right,shut up." I think he is very rational.Behaving according to what he says can avoid arguments between the spouses.Humorous,the third quote is,"By all means marry,if you get a good wife,you'll be happy.If you get a bad one,you'll become a philosopher," said the brilliant Greek philosopher Socrates whose wife was a hellcat.
一个字一个字码出来的啊Q.Q谢过，能顺便解释一下改词的原因吗，是用的不准确，还是习惯就是这样的能解释一下改的几个词的原因吗？比如把right改成correct其实你的词严格来讲都没有用错，但是如果用一些更好的词you can impress your teacher...像你说的把right改成correct，其实right并没错，但是听起来就比correct随便一些了。还有就是复杂句和简单句交错使用会让这篇文章看上去更好。还有就是我把do改成了behaving是因为do本身是一个动词，不能做主语；当它必须做主语的时候，要变成-ing形式，就是“Doing as he said......”而不能只有“do”在那里。至于为什么换成behave...一样的道理，看上去更impressive还有那个Humorous,我错了，应该是Humorously.有问题可以私聊我：）Have a great Thanksgiving!