Good morning ,everyone .I am from the third middle school My hobbies are reading novels , playing computer , playing pianos . My dream is going abroad to travell .So, as a student ,i will work h...能不能在改的稍长一点。现在有点短啊可以的，先采纳我刚写的，我一会写好后发给你（附带中文）有什么不满意的你跟我说，我再改。谢谢