求检查一个英语句子的语法错误!Because of the drastic pressure of entering a high_英语解答

求检查一个英语句子的语法错误!
Because of the drastic pressure of entering a higher school for both teachers and students,teachers prefer to pay more attention on how students could score high marks in exam,rather than the personality and emotionality education.
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prefer to do something rather than ...中间不用逗号
pay attention to
get higher marksscore 可以做动词 score higher marksgoogle一下也是对的，上面两条我接受谢谢但是score本来就有得分意思啊，你后面又是 higher marks的话就会重复了。。