帮我看看这篇英语作文有什么问题吧~(单词拼写和语法)【记叙文】
.In my summer holidays,I did a lot of things.Apart form doing my homework,reading an English novel,watching TV and doing some housework,I went on a trip to Qingdao.It is really a beautiful city.There are many places of interest to see.But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early.I was very happy because it was a fine day.By the time I got to the beach,the clouds on the horizon were turning red.In a little while,a small part of the sun was gradually appearing.The sun was very red,not shining.It rose slowly.At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea,just like a deep-red ball.At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
人气:224 ℃ 时间:2019-11-10 18:25:35
解答
不错,不过深红色不是deep red,是dark red.
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