改错my cousin is already twenty-six year old
My cousin is already twenty-six year old.
As the result,he can't make any money by herself.Now he is in Beijing,dreaming of become a movie star.My uncle and aunt had to give him money every month in order to support him.However,they don't make many money .Now they live a very hard life because of my cousin wishes to realize his dream.In fact,he is old enough to make money and he should stop asking money from his parents.Having a dream is good,so we can't make other people's life worse because or it.Dear editor,do you agree on me?
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