People say that a father's love is as a mountain:heavy and silent.It is heavy because he give all his love to us and it is silent because he does not know how to express.My father has never told me he loved me,so i did not think he loved me and sometimes i was upest about it.However,before i left home for the senior school,he often called me,but just asked me some simple question like:how are things with you?or when are you coming home?Gradual,i realize that what he missed me although he had never told me.So this is father’s love,not obvious and deep.一共有十处错误
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解答
1.as--like(as后跟句子,like后跟单词)第一行
2.give--gives(主语he为单三.因此用gives)第一行
3.express后加上it(it作express的宾语)第二行
4.sometime--sometimes有时,第三行
5.before--after第三行
6.question--questions第四行
7.Gradual--Gradually副语作状语,第五行
8.去掉what(从句中不缺少成分,what多余了)第五行
9.had--has(根据上文中的My father has never told me得知)第五行
10.and--but(not...but...固定搭配)第六行/最后一行
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