Today I went shopping with my friends . At 13:00 we met in my house . At13:30 we left my house. First we went to the（cloth store服装店） , I boughta (T-shirt T恤衫)
,I think it was very cool,my friends thought so . After doing that, we went to the big supermarket . I bought lots of delicious food and junk drink .My friends bought much food too .After that we went to my friend's house ,then we ate food . We were very happy.
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