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One day,Lucy asked her grandfather to give her two yuan.Her grandfather did not know what she wanted to do.He thought she might go to buy some snack.So he catched her .But he found Lucy put the money into a donation box.He understood.Lucy wanted to help people who lived in quake-battered areas.She is a kind-hearted girl.Then grandfather also put some money into the donation box to help the people.If everyone can give them a little help.They will feel love is around them.
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