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The bar chart casts information about the amount that is spent on six consumer goods in four European countries(Gremany,Italy,France,and Britain).Obviously,the situation reflected frome country to coubtry.
We can see the highest overall consumption in four European countries in the Britain.Only in the case of tennis racquets,the amount of Britain and Italy is very closed.And in the other aspects,the speeding of Britain is considerably higher than other countries.However,there exists a totally different situation in that of Gremany.To be specific,Grenmany is the lowest consumer.Surprisingly,Gremany spends more than another country,France,which in terms of tennis racquets and perfumes.
By contrast,Italy and France share a siimilar position among the four European countries listed.Specially,Itlay spends more on personal stereos,tennis racquets and perfumes.And only in terms of photographic films does less than France.Interestingly,Italy and France is equal on the toys consumption.