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Hello,my name is Li Yun.
Yesterday evening , OurClass Two,Grade Sevenheld(举办） an English party .During the party （在晚会上）
We sang songs,danced and played magicals,and so on.Wewere very happy.
Mr.Gao also sang an English song.His voice very nice.（声音非常好听）, After that,在那之后,
some studengts were eating things,
others were talking about their summer holiday .一些学生正在吃东西,一些学生正在讨论暑假.We all had a good time.我们所有人都非常开心这个写的很好可是一看就不是七年级的水平···呵呵，是有个别的难词，但是一些初一优秀点的学生还是写得出的，况且你们初一已经学完了