Hello,everbody.My name is Liu Yan .I am 321 model android. .
Hello,everbody.My name is Liu Yan .I am 321 model android. I serve for the LiFamily and I look after their libary.My job is to store all the books which they borrow from their school or friends in my brain.Of course my brain is as lager as a mountain so work like that is no trouble to me.I really eat books just as people eat food.The Lis has a child who needs me remember all his school textbooks so I can do his homework for him.He just gives me the information on the subject,that has to be done and the page numbers,and I get on with it when he enjoys himself with his friends.Sometimes I didn't think it is right to do his homework for him——it's somewhat cheating.帮忙改出文中的十个错误,先行谢过了!
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I serve for the LiFamily and I look after their libary.(serve for--serve,serve是及物的)
Of course my brain is as lager as a mountain (larger——large,但我不确定你是不是打错了)
Lis has a child who needs me remember all his school textbooks so I can do his homework for him.(needs后面加to)
He just gives me the information on the subject,that has to be done .(that改成which,that不能引导非限定)
Sometimes I didn't think it is right to do his homework for him——it's somewhat cheating.(didn't——doesn't)
下面几个是我不太确定的
My job is to store all the books which they borrow from their school or friends in my brain.(borrow——borrowed)
Of course my brain is as lager as a mountain so work like that is no trouble to me.(trouble——problem,如果larger真打错了的话)
就这些了,别的没看出来,但整篇文章读来觉得都不顺,应该还有错.如果是试卷中的改错题的话,个人觉得这道题出的很一般~个人水平有限,
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