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帮我检查一下这篇文章有语病么
My School Life    Every morning,I get up early.On my way to school the rising sun greets me with a smile.At school I get on well with my teachers and classmates.I like reading aloud in the morning.I listen to the teachers carefully in class,and I often ask questions.I enjoy answering the teachers' questions.I do my homework in the evening.  I take an active part in all kinds of activities.I play football and basketball after school with my friends.I read books in the school library.I talk with my teachers and classmates after class.What a happy life we have at school!
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解答
没啥大的语病,可是就一个字烂.典型的流水账作文(而且时间谁许还有点紊乱),不过表哭,可能是小朋友你年纪还小吧.下面是我帮你修改的作文,觉得好就选我为满意回答吧.The life in this school is seen by me the most ...
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