The English Corner in Zhongshan Park is a place【删in】 where people go to practise their spoken English 【删there】.Every Sunday afternoon they gather around,【talk 改成 talking】 with each other in English.Among them 【have 改成 there are】 students,teachers,doctors and so on.I first 【加 time】went to the English Corner when I was 【加in】Junior Grade Two.【i 改 I】 went 【删to】 there every Sunday 【but改and】 talked with some people in English.In the past three years I 【had 改 have】 never been absent.I′m sure I’ve made great progress in my listening and speaking.Also we have made many friends there.It is really a good place.I hope 【many 改成 more】 friends will join us.
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