First,i will show my gratitude to my parents who give birth to me and raise me up.My parents taught me knowleges about how to be a real man,which inspired me a lot.futhermore,they always support and protect me.But due to my juveniles and childishness,it might be hard for me to understand them.And i tend to argue with them.Anyhow,they are always the ones that i care and value most.
Moreover,i will appreciate my teachers who educate me.What they could bring to me is diffrent from my parents.I acquire acedemic knowleges anduseful skills from them .And they are patient to help me to overcome difficulties which i encounter.They lead me to the truth.
Last,i will be thankful to my classmates who treat me like siblings.We have been together for years and had lots of fun.We share the same experiences and exchange our thoughts.It would be tough days for me without their existence.可以么?自己改的.