Last Sunday was my friend Tim's birthday.I attended his birthday party.The party began at 7:00p.m.When I arrived at his home,there were already many people.Many of my classmates were here.I gave Tim a present,It was a nice watch.Tim was happy because he received mant presents and wishes.At last,we had the birthday cake together.What a wonderful birthday party!
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