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Excuse me for my delay in answering your letter,because I have prepared my final exam last week,in fact,to become an excellent radio announcer is my life goal ,ever since junior high school .I have dream about that
I’d like to travel around the world and write something about my journey ——that’s what I’d do if I had enough money ,I won’t it only a dream ,I hope it’s come true ,so I need to study hard to get more knowledge .
One of my favorites book is "Walden" by Henry D Thoreau.Have you ever read about it?Actually I didn’t like to read popular magazines and comic very much,I most like those books which have Brilliant thoughts and deep insight.how about you?
看看有什么表达不合理的地方,谢谢了^-^
人气:380 ℃ 时间:2020-06-08 18:10:55
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I am sorry for my declining to reply your letter,because i was busy with preparing fina exam last week.
Becoming to an excellent radio announcer is my life goal,so i need to prepare from high school.I dream that one day i can travel around the world and write something as journey to record after i have enough money.It is a dream deserving to phase in all life.
The third paragraph is ok.
我的答案最全面谢了
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