Having read your ad in the newspaper,I feel I'm fit the job,so I'm writing to apply for that.I'm a 21-year-old girl,1.68 meters tall.As a graduate from Chengdu Huaxi Travel School,I spoke not only standard Putonghua,but also excellent English.I got the first place in English competition last year.I was also the winner of a computer contest.Interested in Chinese history,geography or culture,I have read a lot of about them,particular those of Chengdu.So I konw its places of interest like the back of your hand.In addition to,I worked part-time as a guide for one year when at school.Giving the job,I'm sure to make a good guide.My telephone number is 8432161.Hope to hear from you soon.
要求改十处。
人气:440 ℃ 时间:2020-05-31 05:54:18
解答
1.第1行 fit -> fit for 适合的
2.第2行 Travel School -> Tourist School 旅游学校
3.第3行 spoke -> speak 现在一般时即可,表示现在的情况
4.第4行 in English competition -> in the English competition 特指加定冠词
5.第5行 a lot of -> a lot 后面没有跟名词,用a lot即可
(第6行 konw是拼写输入错吧 know)
6.第7行 In addition to -> In addition (不要to)
7.第7行 worked -> had worked (后面有for one year,前面要用完成时,用过去完成时)
8.第7行 when at school -> when I was at school,要么at school (不能说when at school)
9.第7行 Giving -> Given (job被给予,用过去分词)
10.第8行 make -> be / become (make 让做,要说成为用be/become)
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