改过后“for your coming,I have learnt a lot.No matter how life is to be,you have made me strong.thanks a lot!
翻译：因为你的到来,我学会了很多,无论生活将会变成怎样,你已使我变得坚强,
错在现在完成时的结构不对
我记忆中没有”many thanks“这种用法,如果要表达非常感谢,就用thanks a lot或thanks very much,many是修饰可数名词的