语言欠简洁,意思欠连贯
Yesterday I was tired after I finished dong all my housework.My home looked clean.When my mom came back home and noticed this,she felt very happy and kissed me.She made dlicious meal for me as well.When she praised me,I also felt happy .Though I devoted tears and hard work,I still felt happy.If I didn't do that,my life will be boring,for our life needs exercise ,and happiness comes from giving.