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Sunday July.7 Sunny
Hello,I'm Li Hua.I visited the zoo with my parents.We went to the zoo by bike.We saw all kinds of animals.There were many lovely animals.I love pandas,koalas,monkeys,dears...
I saw pandas were eating bamboo,koalas were climbing trees,monkeys were eating bananas,dears were sleeping...How lovely!
We were eating lunch in a restaurant.Then we took pictures.We went home at three in the afternoon.
I had a good time with my parents in the zoo.
I love pandas,koalas,monkeys,dears,< and more.