原文如下：
Many very good soccer (plyers) want to become professional athletes(职业运动员）.Some of them don't want to travel.They (need) staying home near their famies.(Others)realize that soccer (could) be a dangerous game.Players can be hurt very hardly .But many professional athletes make more (than) a million dollars a year.
Professional athletes usually become famous.Spme of them think that this will make(them)happy ,but they sometimes find that they are (famous)for omly a short time.When athletes become famous,reporters and fans watch them all the time and follow them everywhere.The money and the excitement are great,(but)the life of a professional athlete can be (difficult).
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the guy made this question is really primitive in enlgish
Many very good soccer (plyers) want to become professional athletes(职业运动员）.Some of them don't want to travel.They (need) staying home near their famies.(Others)realize that soccer (could) be a dangerous game.Players can be hurt very hardly .But many professional athletes make more (than) a million dollars a year.
Professional athletes usually become famous.Spme of them think that this will make(them)happy ,but they sometimes find that they are (famous)for omly a short time.When athletes become famous,reporters and fans watch them all the time and follow them everywhere.The money and the excitement are great,(but)the life of a professional athlete can be (difficult).
ps
the guy made this question is really primitive in Enlgish