雅思小作文数据表达为什么有老师说不能用 the percent of` ` ```is `````的表达.Europe also _其他解答

雅思小作文数据表达
为什么有老师说不能用 the percent of` ` ```is `````的表达.
Europe also had the highest proportion of land degraded by deforestation, at 9.8%, 能否写成 the data for the deforestation in europe was 9.8%.有人说这个9.8%就是data,所以最好不这么用.data 到底是指代什么呢 ? 谢谢

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The percentage of .is.可以用：比如, the percentage of the carbon dioxide in the air is .你写的句子, 我觉得这样改会更好： Deforestation in Europe accounts for 9.8% in the total amount....谢谢。那the data for a and b were same，at 15%。对吗？还是用was啊？用is ........