中间少了标点?
I do not want her to become anther,you can do it?
很口语化,我不想让她成为另一个,你（帮我）能做到吗?
如果从英语语法来考虑的话,我觉得应该这么断句,至于是另外一个什么我就不知道了,感觉这像句电影台词.