帮我修改下面的一篇英语作文好吗?
Shanghai
Shanghai is my hometown.It's in east of China.Shanghai is an international city as well.There are many famous buildings in Shanghai.Such us the Shanghai Zoo,the Shanghai Grand Theatre and so on.It is interesting to play there.Shanghai's food also very famous.The dumplings are very nice and delicious.The world EXPO takes place in Shanghai and everybody comes to Shanghai to visit.So Shanghai is welcome.I love Shanghai.
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解答
因为我不是上海人,所以对一些地名不太了解,内容上没帮你改多少,但结构上给你做了些修改,希望楼主能满意哈~Shanghai is my hometown.It's in the east of China.As everybody knows,Shanghai is an international cit...
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