求雅思作文批改,以及大概的分数和不足之处
Many people believe that the main
aim for university education is to help graduates to find better jobs,while
some people believe that university education should aim at cultivating
students’ overall abilities.What is your opinion?
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With the development of people ‘s living
standard .There are growing numbers of people pay attention to the issue of university’s
education .Some people believe that university education should aim
at cultivating student’s overall abilities .and other people keep a totally
opposite attitude in it .Personally ,I support the latter’s view and the reason
will be list as follows .
First of all ,there is an old saying that :’It
is not only giving people a fish ,but also teaching people how to fish .’A
successful school not only providing a post to student ,but also teaching them
how to study by themselves in the future .It is the reason why the university
such as Cambridge and peking university is famous in all over the world .
Furthermore ,it can provide more high
quality workforce to the local workforce market ,and then stimulate the
development of the whole country ,enhance the people’s living standard .For example
,there is an dramatic development in China ,since China rebuilt the education system
.It is no denying that education is very important to an country .
On the other hand .Some people believe university
education is help graduates to find a better job .But I believe these students
who are lack the abilities and knowledge will hard to cope with the work if
they didn’t focus on study in university .
In conclusion ,government and companies
should support the university’s education system ,encourage students acquire
more abilities in school .it is a win-win working in long term .