1.The director valued the actor not so much for his broad commercial appeal 【as for his passionate and intelligent approach to every role】.
括号部分为什么不能是 as for him approaching every role passionately and intelligently?
2.The works of the innovative and reclusive sculptor Marisol Escobar attracted considerable attention during the early 1960s,a time when the public craved artistic novelty and critics {focus on } the personal lives of artists.
请问括号部分错在哪,好像没见过focussed啊.