My holiday was a little boring.In July I went to school to learn a lot of boring things for about 2 weeks.Maybe it could help me a lot.But I still think it was boring.After school’s lessons,I joined in a basketball camp.It was very interesting.But it made me fell tried.In August I began to learn Physics.It is important.During August I also played basketball every day with Haoxiang when the weather was not very bad.This was my summer holiday.I think I will be better in study in the new school term.
总的来说语法错还是少数,但是有些语意不是很合逻辑.你对照自己的文章看看,错的我都改过来的.还有最有一句是说,我在新的一学期中学习会更好,不能这么表达的,你这样写实说我在新的一学期身体会更好.所以我就改成学习会更好比较和逻辑了.