1.You eyes will (go 或者be 反正加个动词,因为UGLY是形容词)ugly,too.be+adj.结构
2.I think you don’t need me to teach you how to become a person,don’t you?（这句DON'T 要提前的,改成 I don’t think you need me to teach you how to become a person,do you?)以后记得哦 don't都要提到THINK前面的.
3、不该用OR 这是选择用词 中文翻译出来合适 英文就不行了 应改成So please think about yourself and maybe I can take you to the hospital.
其他就没有了 加油