一段英语文字纠错,看看有没有语法错误和用词不规范Life is reallyhard,so sometimes we will a_英语解答

一段英语文字纠错,看看有没有语法错误和用词不规范
Life is reallyhard,so sometimes we will ask ourselves what we are living for.The 14 dayshas witnessed Jang Tea-san’s grow and leaves us a question about the reasons ofliving.
After fightingagainst greed,hypocrisy and injustice,Jang Tae-san plans a new life with thepeople he likes.He says:“There are some people I love in the world.It is thereason why I live.” Tae-san has found his life goal,and it’s our turn toanswer this question now.

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这个结尾不错,但也有小问题.
Life is really hard,so sometimes we will【删除will】 ask ourselves what we are living for.The 14 days has witnessed Jang Tea-san’s grow【改为growth】 and leaves us a question about the reasons of living【the reasons of living改为reasons for living】.
After fighting against greed,hypocrisy and injustice,Jang Tae-san plans a new life with the people he likes.He says:“There are some people I love in the world.It is the reason why【删除why】 I live.” Tae-san has found his life goal,and it’s our turn to answer this question now.