My mother is a nice person.she always make me feel （happiness……happy.hapiness是名词,feel后应该接形容词）. I have two （mother加S因为是复数）. One mother （she删掉） lives in Los Angeles. she is my stepmother. she always （make……making) me feel bad. I (have……did) not liked her since I met her. (Right 去掉吧）now I live with her. Another mother (she删掉）（ live加S） in China now. I （bore……wan born in Guangdong of China.（from……when) I was a child I lived with her. (Each……every） time（when)I wacth my mother and I in the picture I cry, because my mother (make ……gave)me a lot of recollection. When I was a child my mother taught me (much thing……many things) and (cared me a lot……took care of me carefully). I will always remember my mother
我只能给你改到这了,期待高手给你继续改.你的作文问题很多.以后写完了自己好好看看. 注意单复数,注意短语的搭配.多读一些背一些范文,会对你的作文有帮助.呵呵,加油~~!