1.拼错的单词:Acient society(ancient),sprangout (sprang out),signifigent changes (significant),Eavlier(earlier) technology,are satisfield (satisfied)by people
2.句法:个人感觉句子没有必要写那么长.句子太长的话反而容易出错.另外还要注意下表达方式.Colourful life in present age benefit from sustainable technology and earlier innovations really made our lives had more signifigent changes than recent innovations.
in present age 改成“nowadays”,"made our lives had more signifigent changes " 改成“brought more significant changes than”
3.格式:雅思作文最好写成“introduction-body-conclusion”,
4.总体感觉这篇作文在6分左右.