大虾帮我看下这段英文写得怎样:C,your application of visa has accepted and the date of.
C,your application of visa has accpeted and the date of document is May 16.I have asked help from Jacky to relese your visa in advance and try to get it before May 12.Is that okay for you?
我不是要译成中文,我是想大家帮我看下写得对不对.