昨天早晨我们去公元,天气很好,我们也很高兴,男孩们踢足球,满头大汉,女孩们玩捉迷藏,她们玩的很高兴,我静静的按下快门,将这一刻留住 （绝对的中式英语,问题很多）那你能按照我这个意思给改一下吗？加分we went to the parkyesterday morning ，the weather WAS very good.We WERE also very happy.boys piayed football.They WERE ALL SWEATY . girls piayed hide and seek.They had a blast.I pressed the shutter of the camera Quietly TOKEEPthis moment基本这样就可以了一个句子要有动词的 ，很多都没有时态要注意保持一致