Fish and chips and Chinese takeaway food is very popular in England .But they are less popular in America .In the USA ,they eat takeaway food,like children .But the most popular takeaway food is hamburger .It looks like bread has meat in it.Ham is a kind of pork,but the hamburger doesn't have any pork in it.It has beef in it .The beef is inside a kind of cake .Hamburgers are delicious.They are very popular in the USA,even in England and Australia.
1.and 之前不加逗号
2.takeaway好像中间没有-
3.因为你后面是“But they are..." 那么 应该是are吧
4.less popular
5.also 可以不要,也可以改成too
6.hamburger前不用定冠词
7.It looks
8.Ham is a kind of pork,拼错了吧
9.doesn't have any pork 否定some要改成any
10.最后一行 Hamburgers are 吧