这样的英语作文,10分能得几分
A Weekend to Remember
Last weekend, I went to San Francisco, CA with some of my friends. There we visited a big zoo. We saw a lot of animals there, such as American, African, Asian, European and so on, we had a good time there because we can only see Chinese in China and we saw many foreigner there. Then we visited a big museum, we saw many beautiful tourist guide, that was nice! In my province, most of the girls aren't very beautiful.
But there was also something scary. The policeman there was scared, we saw a heavy policeman with short black hair, he saw a drunk driver and then he shot him! That was cool but scary.
All in all, I had a nice but scary weekend.
第二段 The policeman there was scared
scared 改成 scary
人气:370 ℃ 时间:2020-05-01 04:13:32
解答
第一段,we saw a lot of animals there 后面举例是美国人,亚洲人,这样真的好吗?
如果字写得好看,排版漂亮的话,7分以上应该没问题.
推荐
猜你喜欢
- what's this?A this is key B it's key
- 给革命先烈献花留言,如何写缅怀的话语?
- A,B,C三个带电小球质量均为m,放在绝缘光滑地上,QB=_3q,QA=6q,在C上加一多大恒力,使三球保持间距运动
- 小明做一道乘法计算题时,把其中一个因数23看成了32,结果得到的积比正确的积多2277.请问正确的积是多少?
- 紧急 下列家庭小实验,不能得到溶液的是 A 蔗糖+水 B 面粉+水 C 植物油+汽油 D 碘+酒精
- 已知axb=400,如果b不变,a乘3,积则是( ),如果a不变,b除以2,积则是( )
- 如图,BD是△ABC的中线,CE⊥BD于E,AF⊥BD交BD的延长线于F. (1)探索BE,BF和BD三者之间的数量关系,并证明; (2)连接AE、CF,求证:AE∥CF.
- 形容荒凉的成语