恕我直言,错很多,中式英语.
你中文要表达什么意思呢?写出来看看,帮你改改.说得再笼统些，一家人在一起吃吃团圆饭，大家欢声笑语，畅所欲言，开开心心。我的家人健康快乐，工作顺利。Simply put 或者 Simply speaking, all family members have dinner together, we chat, we laugh, we speak out freely with happiness. 前面可以加 Wish them all happy and healthy with smoothly work.最后一句也可以这么说：Wish them all the joy to live, the health to body, the smooth to work.