嗯,你的开头好像错了几个单词.郁闷,我们也要写作文,也是议论文,也是人们持两种观点.现在的高中 ,呼
Nowadays it is forbidden to set off firecracker in big cities.
People hold different opinions towards this problem.More than half people think that government shouldn't prevent us from setting off fireworks.Firstly,they think it's a traditional way to celebrate Spring Festival as long as Chinese history.Secondly,The fireworks in the sky on the evening of the festival were very colorful and beautiful.Enjoying the wonderful sight with family or friends can make relationship between us better and deeper.(这句话好像有点问题,可是想不到好词了,你修改一下)Lastly,it make our city filled with happiness and excitement.
There is also another opinion in our city.they believe fireworks can cause many troubles ,for example,a big fire will be burning and the air will be polluted.
不写先啦,一会儿再写.
想到了一些句子,再写下来.
It’s very dangerous for some children who don't know how they should set off fireworks.They may get injured so that his or her family must be very worried .
老师改后告诉我成绩哦