求教英语帝 看看这段话有没有什么语法错误
Very glad to meet you.first of all,I start to introduce myself.My name is vivien come here,I choose this major reason is because I like it,it fully reflects the service tenet,in two years' study,I have mastered some professional knowledge,learning at the same time,I also actively participate in school activities,holiday for work-study,hope to study and work at times
嗯嗯 其实这个不是我写的那 我一个朋友叫我帮他问问的 我也看不懂