whenever I look back the time,I will easily think of my grandmom,someone who is always with a smile on her face,tender like the water.I had been living with my grandmom from 3 to 12 years old.In my memory,grandmom would get up very early,mostly before darkbreak,and then started to make breadfast for me,woke me up and dressed me.She always did these in a slow but ordered step.When I did something wrong,grandmom never shouted at me,in fact she never shouted at anyone,but held my hands in her hands and told me some strories or her experience to let me recognize what I did wrong.I did miss that past time.
关于回忆小时候和祖母的时光.自己写的,有问题直说~你看看,要翻译的话可以跟我说.最好再加一个结尾，我会给你加分的结尾。。。你是希望一个有情节的结尾还是只是抒发情感性的结尾？把最后一句I did miss that past time.去掉。我写歌抒发性的结尾吧。Athough grandmom and I have been apart for many years and there are few time we spend together, I will always treasure the time we have and that teach me to be appreciate to life and family.不错