slender最好用slim.slender含有微弱的意思.
We have high well-knownness改成we are well-known i the world.
.Almost all the people known me.known改为know.因为是一般情况.
You known,改为you know--
bad for people's body..body改为health
They think it can make him .him改为them
Or they will became weak sooner.became 改为become.
这篇作文好像是查字典拼出来的?
不是很好..章词什么的都用得不好.提个意见~